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Make Me a Phoenix

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Pull me from the ashes
of the fires I set to my soul
would I still be a phoenix if I needed you to save me?

Could I rise from my own ashes?
does a fresh soul come with my return?

Please help pull my from the ashes
so I may truly live again...
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Eryn-Grace-OMalley's avatar
:wow: that was great, simple but powerful. I particularly like the line, "would I still be a pheonix if I needed you to save me?" It's just great!! =D